Passive and Active Voice in the Text
State of the Developing World's
Health
Billions of dollars are pumped every year into the Developing World to combat diseases such as HIV/AIDS and Malaria. But how well has that money been utilized? And is it true that this money is harming the healthcare system in these poor countries more than it is helping?
IslamOnline.net (IOL)'s Health and Science Section caught up with Dr. Jim Yong Kim, ex-director of the World Health Organisation's HIV/AIDS Department, before the International AIDS Conference 2008 which opened on Sunday, Aug. 3, 2008 in Mexico City, Mexico, to discuss these issues and many more that are of particular concern to developing countries. During his time as director of the HIV/AIDS Department, Dr. Kim led the "3x5" initiative, which was designed to put three million people in developing countries on AIDS treatment by 2005. He focused on initiatives and programs that helped developing countries scale up their treatment, prevention, and care programs. Dr. Kim has 20 years of experience in improving health in developing countries. He is the cofounder and former executive director of Partners in Health, a not-for-profit organization that supports a range of health programs in poor communities worldwide. He is currently leading a new Harvard University-based initiative in Global Health Delivery. It is designed to discover and widely share knowledge about the effective implementation of health programs in poor communities.
Dr. Kim has received a MacArthur "Genius" Fellowship and was named one of America's 25 best leaders by US News & World Report. He was also named one of the 100 most influential people in the world by Time magazine.
Changing Active Voice into Passive Voice
1. That this money is harming the healthcare system —> Healthcare system is being harmed by this money.
2. A non profit organization that supports a range of health program. —> A range pf health program is supported by a non profit organization.
3. He is currently leading a new Harvard University-based initiative in Global Health Delivery. --> A new Havard University is currently being lead by him.
3. He is currently leading a new Harvard University-based initiative in Global Health Delivery. --> A new Havard University is currently being lead by him.
State of the Developing World'sHealth
Billions of dollars are pumped every year into the Developing World to combatdiseases such as HIV/AIDS and Malaria. But how well has that money been utilized?And is it true that this money is harming the healthcare system in these poor countriesmore than it is helping?IslamOnline.net (IOL)'s Health and Science Section caught up with Dr. Jim YongKim, ex-director of the World Health Organisation's HIV/AIDS Department, beforethe International AIDS Conference 2008 which opened on Sunday, Aug. 3, 2008 inMexico City, Mexico, to discuss these issues and many more that are of particular concern to developing countries.During his time as director of the HIV/AIDS Department, Dr. Kim led the "3x5"initiative, which was designed to put three million people in developing countries onAIDS treatment by 2005. He focused on initiatives and programs that helpeddeveloping countries scale up their treatment, prevention, and care programs.Dr. Kim has 20 years of experience in improving health in developing countries. He isthe cofounder and former executive director of Partners in Health, a not-for-profitorganization that supports a range of health programs in poor communitiesworldwide.He is currently leading a new Harvard University-based initiative in Global HealthDelivery. It is designed to discover and widely share knowledge about the effectiveimplementation of health programs in poor communities.Dr. Kim has received a MacArthur "Genius" Fellowship and was named one of America's 25 best leaders by US News & World Report. He was also named one of the 100 most influential people in the world by Time magazin
State of the Developing World'sHealth
Billions of dollars are pumped every year into the Developing World to combatdiseases such as HIV/AIDS and Malaria. But how well has that money been utilized?And is it true that this money is harming the healthcare system in these poor countriesmore than it is helping?IslamOnline.net (IOL)'s Health and Science Section caught up with Dr. Jim YongKim, ex-director of the World Health Organisation's HIV/AIDS Department, beforethe International AIDS Conference 2008 which opened on Sunday, Aug. 3, 2008 inMexico City, Mexico, to discuss these issues and many more that are of particular concern to developing countries.During his time as director of the HIV/AIDS Department, Dr. Kim led the "3x5"initiative, which was designed to put three million people in developing countries onAIDS treatment by 2005. He focused on initiatives and programs that helpeddeveloping countries scale up their treatment, prevention, and care programs.Dr. Kim has 20 years of experience in improving health in developing countries. He isthe cofounder and former executive director of Partners in Health, a not-for-profitorganization that supports a range of health programs in poor communitiesworldwide.He is currently leading a new Harvard University-based initiative in Global HealthDelivery. It is designed to discover and widely share knowledge about the effectiveimplementation of health programs in poor communities.Dr. Kim has received a MacArthur "Genius" Fellowship and was named one of America's 25 best leaders by US News & World Report. He was also named one of the 100 most influential people in the world by Time magazine
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